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Wednesday, September 21, 2011

How Close Am I To You...

My forehead is touching yours that
   I seem to hear your thoughts...

Though your eyes blur into my sight
   amazingly, I can still see their beauty...

I can hear you breathing and 
   smell it as if it's no different to mine...

As I kiss your lips, so soft
   my lips cannot deny its sweetness...

I can feel your warmth and 
   the life your body radiates...

I can feel your heart beat and
   it has a perfect rhythm with mine...

As we wrap each other with an embrace
   love and security fills any empty space...

Your wholeness makes me feel
   that piece of heaven here on earth...

I'm part of you as you're of me
   that's how close I am to you...

Yahweh bless...

Posted by ralph at 10:34 PM
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24 comments:

  1. JennSeptember 24, 2011 at 5:05 AM

    Very heartfelt and beautiful!!

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  2. Scolex PortalSeptember 24, 2011 at 5:38 AM

    Very romantic! Masyadong inlove.

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  3. Susan DusterhoftSeptember 24, 2011 at 10:37 AM

    You really spoke to me! Lovely and beautiful! Thank you for sharing!

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  4. UnknownSeptember 24, 2011 at 11:43 AM

    Very romantic and beautiful!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com/

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  5. marjaan manoonSeptember 24, 2011 at 10:37 PM

    very nice poem....

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  6. Edmar del Castillo GuquibJanuary 13, 2012 at 7:32 AM

    I never thought you're a poet too.

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  7. Gil CamporazoJanuary 13, 2012 at 7:38 AM

    I wonder what style of poem writing you are using or adapting! At least you've expressed your thoughts and feelings on how close you are with each other.

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  8. yuukiJanuary 13, 2012 at 8:38 AM

    is it feb already? coz love is in the air...

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 13, 2012 at 9:02 AM

    5 stars! Very nice!

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  10. Lady PatchyJanuary 13, 2012 at 10:34 AM

    cheesy naman masyado,kakainlove.ngayon ko lang nabasa ang poem mo .galing ,may talent ka pala.

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  11. kikoJanuary 13, 2012 at 2:29 PM

    The closer you get
    the love you won't regret
    poem filled with lovely thoughts
    will surely return what was lost

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  12. Ion GonzagaJanuary 13, 2012 at 2:53 PM

    it takes one helluva inspiration to create a strong piece. my mind is picturing every scene in every line that i read. in short, nakarelate ako

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  13. Blair VillanuevaJanuary 13, 2012 at 7:34 PM

    soo romantic

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  14. chinoJanuary 13, 2012 at 8:07 PM

    It actually pertains to the one you love . Whoever that is and or the Lord Jesus Christ. God bless us all.

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  15. UnknownJanuary 13, 2012 at 11:01 PM

    very seductive in fairness ... nakakatuwa :)

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  16. Shirgie ScfJanuary 13, 2012 at 11:06 PM

    I felt like crying..lol...but yeah, if you will offer this to the one you love, you will really make him/her happy and kilig.

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  17. San Pablo CityJanuary 13, 2012 at 11:56 PM

    You are so close to each other, are you conjoined twins? He he he!

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    1. ralphJanuary 14, 2012 at 8:50 PM

      more than that... we are one... hehehe... Yahweh bless.

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  18. sioneeJanuary 14, 2012 at 12:57 AM

    A poem of a person so deeply in love. this is very nice!:)

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  19. julieJanuary 14, 2012 at 2:31 AM

    suck a sweet and romantic poem. Wish someone would at least make 4 lines for me.. So kilig.. hehe!

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  20. stacyJanuary 14, 2012 at 9:53 AM

    OMG if someone wrote this for me. I'd be heartstruck!

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  21. ChaJanuary 14, 2012 at 11:07 AM

    How romantic! Naman! Feel na feel!

    http://travel-on-a-shoe-string.blogspot.com/2012/01/choco-late-de-batirol.html

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  22. JhenJanuary 14, 2012 at 1:52 PM

    Grabe sa kilig!

    Yahweh bless you and your beloved!
    this poem is one of the most simple yet romantic poems I have ever read! ang sayang ma in love!!!

    @julie: same na tayo ng wish ahihi

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  23. ralphJanuary 14, 2012 at 8:53 PM

    thanks to all your wonderful comments, guys... makes me want to write more... i still have a lot in my heart, just waiting to be written. Yahweh bless.

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